good morning!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Suraj ne bhi angadhai li hai,
fir aapki nind k sath ladhi kyu hai?
sir pe exams aa gaye hai,
fir bhi ham sab se itne dur padhai kyu hai?
kahte hai.subah subah sapno me
mithas badh jati hai,
fir hamari sapnno se judai kyu hai?
chodo,
roj kahte ho aaj to baji mar jaenge,
kitne din bit gaye,
fir ye bevajah roj roj shahanai kyu hai?
ab jab swar gunj hi utha hai,
to jago..........
nayi havaye,nayi dishae!
nayi manjhile.nayi aashae!
naya aasman.naye sapne
naya din sab apne
aapka intajar kar rahe hai................................
good morning
D shivani
nagpur
17 comments:
Good Attempt Shivani. I liked it very much.
I would have liked it much more if it would have been in Hindi Unicode script. Now is the time for you to try Baraha.
Welcome to Blogosphere.
सतत पुढे जा
तुझी वाट पाहत आहेत
शहरे प्रकाशाची
तुझ्या प्रगतीला सीमा आहे
फक्त आकाशाची
तुषार जोशी, नागपूर
Hey... Very nice yaar... good gng .. Keep it up ..
cool... chhan ahe..keep it up/...
Sunil B
hiiiii.....its really very nice...
send this to all ur pal...i no thy all will love it...
keep going....
khup chan!!!!
really bhot bhot bhot hi achchhi panktiyaan hai....
inspirational + student ki majboor life... !!!!
GOOD Morning... :)
I think this artical should be published in news paper. The Youth must know the truth of RAM JANMABHOOMI
खूप छान..फार उपयोगी पडेल हे लिखाण
.comhi............shivani...........i lke ur blog.........seriously it is very nice and inspirational too........u must write various blogs like this........
It's a Good Article i must say ... Nice Research ... And Brilliantly Put .. But I still think for anything which is religious HUMAN LIFE is NOT a PRICE to be paid... Ayodhye la itihas ahe yaat shankach nahi .. Pan Khudda Ramala tari aaplya mansanche pran ghalvun kivha jiva var betel asa karya karun swataha chi karmabhumi pavitra karayachi asel ka yachi mala shanka ahe .. aapan jya samajat rahato tithe saglya prakar che lok rahatat .. Ha vishay uttam ahe .. kharokhar prerna denara ahe .. pan ha itka imp ahe ka ... ki tysathi aapan mhanto ahe ki aapan jiv hi deu ... are jevha garaj aste tevha aapn kutryala suddha wachvat nahi .. rastya varchya mansani dhakka dila and tumhala padla tar tyala shivya dyachya adhi tumhi tyla vicharta ka ki to Hindu ahe ki Muslim .. seema reshevar ladhnarya tumche javan yanna thodi shantata rakhu dya .. tynche ayusha adich khadtar ahe .. keval mandir bandhaila hava ha vishay gheun emergency anya aivaji aapan te mandir amicably kasa bandhu saku tycha vichar karuya .. karan ha vishay shevti raaajkiya toh rrjkiyach rahil ... Bandhun zalyavar amhi bandhla .. and nahi bandhla tar amhi bandhun nahi dila hyach comments yenar ahet ... sagle Hindu changle nahit ani sagle musalman vait nahit .. je ha vishay khadtat te fakta hushar ahet .. karan ultimately tyna fyaada ahe .. tymule mala asa vatta ki evdhi kalwal itar goshti baddal aasawi ..Me Hindu ahe ani tyat garwa balagto ani mhanunach konala maza dharma shreshtha ahe .. kiwa hi mazhya dharmachi jaga ahe he patwaichi mala garaj vatat nahi.. parampara, saunskruti mala japayachi ahe.. pan ti mazhya pudhchya generation la he sangun ke aamhi Hindu aahot .. aamhi hi history ahe .. pan keval samajachya bhlyasathi ami ha aatahas kela nahi .. ti jaga hindunchi ahe .. pan aata tithe koni nahi karan tithe shantata ahe .. baki koni Hindu/Muslim tithe aala ki shaaantata jail.. ani te maza hindu dharma shikwat nahi asa mala watta Shreee Ram Jai Ram Jai Jai Ram!
ho chuki hai pear parbat si pighalni chaheye, is hemalaya se koi ganga nekal ni chaheye, shirf hangama khad karna makasad nahi mera, makasad ye hai ki ye surat badalni chaheye, mere sene me na sahi tere sene me he sahi, ho kahi bhi agg magar ye agg jalni chajeye. jai shree ram .ram lala hum ayege mandir bhaveya banayege. jitendra singh thakur
Ek dost ka dost se wada hai jo marte dum tak nebhayege, mautt aie to tum se pahele hum jayege........ tum ko na bhul payege tumahe bhi jaldi bulayege.
very well written shivani, technically correct and appealing!!!
keep it up, get this published in the newspapers too
खूप छान. अगदी अभ्यासपूर्वक लिहिला आहेस. असे म्हणतात कि इतिहास हा कधीच खरा नसतो. कारण तो जेत्यांनी लिहिलेला असतो. त्यामुळे बरेच प्रसंग अतिरंजित, काही काल्पनिक तर काही वगळलेले असू शकतात. पण विविध लिखाणातून मिळणारे संदर्भ आणि त्यांच्यातील सुसूत्रता डोळसपणे अभ्यासल्यास थोडेफार सत्याच्या जवळ आपण जाऊ शकतो. तू तीन वर्षाची होतीस तर मी खूप जाणता होतो. मला 'सकाळ' ची हेडलाईन सुध्धा अगदी क्लिअर आठवते "कार सेवकांकडून वादग्रस्त वास्तू जमीनदोस्त". अगदी काल परवाच वाचल्यासारखे वाटते पण यार विश्वास देखील बसत नाही.. चक्क वीस वर्षे होत आली. लिहीत रहा.
shivani dis r d right article really it should get soume weightages in newspaper so dat sum youth should cum to knw d real facts
bst wshes for ur future article
Regards,
Snehal Kuchankar
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